While I do wish you wouldn't have separated the sentence insults from the one-liners, I do love the rhyme/phrase used. It has so much truth. I do think working with different "fonts" would help give this piece more life. Like have the insults be scratchy and sharp like knives to show what sort of pain they can bring, what kind of weapon they can be. You know what I'm saying?
I separated them as a mental organization thing, because I'm weird like that. Yeah, multiple fonts would have made this piece more impactful, it's true. The only problem being that I have 2 fonts available for my handwriting. The ugly one above and strict cursive. I'll work on expanding my handwriting.